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The last couple of chapters were two chapters too long--I skimmed the sex scenes--so I think the basic story was engaging, but it would have been better tighter, less stretched out with repetitive sex. (The first several sexy scenes were tense, important for development, well placed and played.)
— Nov 09, 2015 02:01PM
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I'm loving the journey of Andy, from solipsism to empathy, from meaningless, quick, high pleasures to deeper, calmer contentment. Man, is he a piece of work. I also like how Ethan is dominant and strong, but he isn't perfect: he's too harsh sometimes and scared of the feelings and desires Andy creates in him. (I wish Henry had his own story, from his pov.)
— Nov 09, 2015 01:06PM
