Ellen Viville’s Reviews > The Butcher, The Baker, The Candlestick Maker > Status Update

This is one bullshit ass story. Woman could've just put this on wattpad and it would have more succes. Again it feels like this woman just wanted to make a biography of her sexual activities. Jumping from one scene to the other. I read a new guys name every page.

Honestly:) I don't like the way it is written. It goes too fast. There are so many time skips that i need to think where she is, what she is doing, with who and why. Almost no details in the spicy scenes. "We had sex. I came." Like miss girl? To me it sounds like a young adult making her own wattpad stories based on her old sex stories so she could keep track of her slutty behaviour.