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This is so hard to read.
My major grievances:
1) Why are so many words and random half sentences italicised?
2) What even is the magic system? I. Don't. Get. It.
3) Why would she travel to find Erwin in jail only to release him before he helps her? Is she dumb?
4) It feels like I've stumbled into a book with characters who have already had a story, and I'm supposed to know and care about them already. I don't.
— Feb 24, 2024 01:13AM
My major grievances:
1) Why are so many words and random half sentences italicised?
2) What even is the magic system? I. Don't. Get. It.
3) Why would she travel to find Erwin in jail only to release him before he helps her? Is she dumb?
4) It feels like I've stumbled into a book with characters who have already had a story, and I'm supposed to know and care about them already. I don't.
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"Althea's fists met with the invisible wall that kept her trapped within the nightmares that had already span a web for her to die in."
1) This sentence is flowery nonsense.
2) Nothing bad has happened to this character yet.
3) She is captured by someone who doesn't want to hurt her.
4) Shouldn't it be "spun"?
A nonsense sentence that adds nothing. So far that's the summary of the whole book imo.
— Feb 24, 2024 01:24AM
1) This sentence is flowery nonsense.
2) Nothing bad has happened to this character yet.
3) She is captured by someone who doesn't want to hurt her.
4) Shouldn't it be "spun"?
A nonsense sentence that adds nothing. So far that's the summary of the whole book imo.
