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Selina
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Dying to finish this train wreck. Thus far I can sum it up in a few words: decent plot, bad editing, poor writing. She is trying too hard to sound smart and misusing words and phrases. The real question is this...should I give up or stick it out?
— Oct 30, 2015 09:13AM
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Selina
is on page 231 of 370
Ughhh now story inconsistency. And how old are these characters supposed to be? Because they don't act the age she says they are and they do jobs they wouldn't actually be allowed to do. On top of bad writing and improper phrase usage and bad grammar. I can't even take this seriously anymore. I can't enjoy the plot with all the problems. Just want to finish it...
— Nov 07, 2015 09:42PM
Selina
is on page 198 of 370
Argh a body can't be cold while the blood is still warm...blood that's not even in the body! And the grammar just keeps getting worse...
— Nov 03, 2015 09:49AM
