Jules H’s Reviews > The Wedding Dress > Status Update

There so many errors that a good editor should have caught. For example, the dress Dixie selects for Charlotte is described as having elbow-length sleeves, but in the next sentence, Dixie calls it cap-sleeved (quite different). Similarly, when Katherine tells Charlotte she was neighbors with her husband’s family until she was a freshman, she then says she moved in 7th grade. It’s getting very distracting.