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Kristi Cramer
Kristi Cramer is on page 120 of 368
Oct 26, 2015 04:04PM
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Kristi Cramer
Kristi Cramer is on page 238 of 368
She sure draws bad characters well. I'M plotting ways they can get rid of Liza!
Oct 31, 2015 12:14AM
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Kristi Cramer
Kristi Cramer is on page 194 of 368
It's starting to get better. Even though I'm impatient, I do like the descriptions of the Wyoming landscape. Reminds my of my driving time.
Oct 29, 2015 12:24AM
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Kristi Cramer
Kristi Cramer is on page 70 of 368
Interesting thoughts about art and Wyoming, but the head-hopping is killing me. And again (still) the internal dialog as exposition. Yawn.
Oct 24, 2015 11:46AM
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Kristi Cramer
Kristi Cramer is on page 40 of 368
Yeesh. A lot of internal dialog, blatantly used as a device for exposition. Here's hoping it gets better.

And what's with the 1.5" line spacing? Trying to make the book look longer than it is? Mixed with the tiny font, it is confusing, and a challenge to read. :-/
Oct 21, 2015 05:03PM
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