Jaimee Ghost’s Reviews > North on Drummond > Status Update
Jaimee Ghost
is 32% done
Okay so I'm kinda liking this but the writing....the author doesn't seem to get that there can be strings of dialogue! Every speech sentence doesn't have to have a paragraph of explanation behind it!
— Oct 26, 2015 05:03AM
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Jaimee Ghost
is 99% done
Overall not as satisfying as I'd hoped, but still good.
— Oct 28, 2015 10:56AM
Jaimee Ghost
is 51% done
Also there's no way Drew looks like that guy on the cover...not with as skinny as he's described.
— Oct 27, 2015 09:15PM
Jaimee Ghost
is 51% done
This is really slow and that's the only reason why I haven't finished it yet. It's a great concept but there's too much word vomit and not enough dialogue. It's all narration.
— Oct 27, 2015 09:14PM
Jaimee Ghost
is 16% done
Okay seriously with the Sandy Bottom Bay usage. We get it. We know where they all live.
— Oct 24, 2015 09:53AM
Jaimee Ghost
is 11% done
Is this a new author? Where is the editor? Because the name of the town (Sandy Bottom Bay) is annoying and is used on every single page. On average probably more than once a page.
— Oct 23, 2015 10:11PM
