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Sean
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I liked elements of this but I found it a little too convoluted. The heavy concentration of (similar) names made the history of the story somewhat difficult for me to understand. I'm not good with names in movies/books. It's fine when it's a fleshed out character, but when it's just the name some I'm hopeless.

Some shoddy paragraphing and dashes in this edition.
Oct 21, 2015 06:45PM
The End of the Sentence

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