Tay’s Reviews > Sins Of Our Father > Status Update
Tay
is 24% done
I’m sorry it’s just sooooo bad 😂
The grammatical errors, being in love after less than a month with very little interactions, the constant typos, exclamation marks in every other line, I’m laughing in disbelief. Not to mention the daddy kink just being thrown in out of nowhere.
— Feb 07, 2024 10:00AM
The grammatical errors, being in love after less than a month with very little interactions, the constant typos, exclamation marks in every other line, I’m laughing in disbelief. Not to mention the daddy kink just being thrown in out of nowhere.
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Tay
is 12% done
Oh geez what am I reading.. the instant sex, overuse of “!” during sex scenes and internal monologue. I’m not finding a plot yet, just heavy smut.
— Feb 07, 2024 09:19AM
