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Jaxon Rose
is 12% done
Still trying to get through this one. Tense is present. Prose is very unpolished/high school feeling.
I am very confused why the FMC is just immediately jumping at the prospect of living on an island with 2 strangers. Just because these two strangers killed the men who were going to kidnap you doesn't mean they're not going to do the exact same thing. It's really doing my head in.
— Feb 04, 2024 01:07PM
I am very confused why the FMC is just immediately jumping at the prospect of living on an island with 2 strangers. Just because these two strangers killed the men who were going to kidnap you doesn't mean they're not going to do the exact same thing. It's really doing my head in.
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Jaxon Rose
is 10% done
I'm not sure if i'm going to finish this or not. The writing style is young/unpolished feeling. I believe this story was written early in the author's life (teenager?) and they rewrote it later but it's not vibing with me. I'll give it a little longer before I decide.
— Jan 30, 2024 03:10PM
