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is 36% done
This seems like a series of vignettes to me, jumping forward in time by small increments. We don't see far into the characters themselves or the relationships between them. While I'm interested in seeing what happens next, I'm not as absorbed. as I could be.
— Feb 01, 2024 07:03AM

