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Sheila
is on page 135 of 547
So wordy. A back story on a back story is annoying. Reader forgotten what the possible point could be! Don’t like the flipping between time periods.
— Jan 29, 2024 11:47AM
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Sheila
is on page 210 of 547
On the verge of giving up. Skipping huge chunks of words to get to the story. So verbose.. so descriptive adding nothing to the story. Cannot engage with any character.
— Jan 30, 2024 01:10PM
Sheila
is on page 55 of 547
Already feeling this is a little bread. Overly descriptive. Verbose.
— Jan 24, 2024 10:39PM
