Heathen Nicholson’s Reviews > Alpha's Darkling Bride > Status Update
Heathen Nicholson
is 5% done
At times the crassness makes me cringe. I like the writing in this story so far but it doesn't need to be so crass. It's kind of insulting to my intelligence.
— Oct 01, 2015 08:51AM
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Heathen Nicholson
is 15% done
I like the premise of the book and most of the writing but I can't get past the cringe worthy crudeness that just seems throwing in there. I think it lacks a little finesse on Cades part and could've been written a little bit better.
— Oct 01, 2015 11:25AM
