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Windypicnic
is 83% done
Again, I really wish there was less emphasis on romance but I like that there's a repeated theme of respect and equivalent exchange in the romantic aspects. Because let's face it, this could have gone bad fast if Keenan was more of a douchebag.
— Oct 01, 2015 05:16AM
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Windypicnic
is 68% done
Getting rather interesting. I still rather wish this didn't have a romantic element but I have to admit that Moira and Keenan's growing respect for one another is decently handled.
— Sep 30, 2015 06:04AM
Windypicnic
is 33% done
I actually just had to look up when this story was set because as readable as it is, the language sounds extremely modern. 1903 - yeah no, Moira's thoughts sound like those of a present day 20-something. Terribly jarring at times.
— Sep 29, 2015 10:20AM
Windypicnic
is 26% done
I wish we'd had more of a glimpse of Moira's power in that scene, even though it would be problematic for her. She's sitting on some serious abilities and I really want to see her use them.
It bugs me that she keeps referring to herself as a skeleton though. Emaciated, thin, malnourished - there's plenty of words for what she is owing to her experience that aren't just I'M A SKELETON.
— Sep 29, 2015 02:20AM
It bugs me that she keeps referring to herself as a skeleton though. Emaciated, thin, malnourished - there's plenty of words for what she is owing to her experience that aren't just I'M A SKELETON.
Windypicnic
is 10% done
I had no expectations going into this as I randomly found it on one of my Kobo pre-ordering sprees. However the opening was very strong and Moira clearly formidable so now I'm quite intrigued as to where this will head.
— Sep 28, 2015 02:51PM
