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Tami Veldura
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A little lost in the setting. We're on a space ship? We're on a planet? Very unclear when setting changes. Also mixing the main characters. No voice change b/w them when POV changes so I'm having trouble keeping them straight. Really liking the concept, though.
— Sep 30, 2015 10:03PM
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Tami Veldura
is 24% done
A little lost in the setting. We're on a space ship? We're on a planet? Very unclear when setting changes. Also mixing the main characters. No voice change b/w them when POV changes so I'm having trouble keeping them straight. Really liking the concept, though.
— Sep 19, 2015 09:12AM
