ManthaReads ’s Reviews > Persecution > Status Update

This author has a serious issue with time jumps!!!

Okay…now it’s getting weird. She’s jealous that she’s not the one screwing her cousin??

Give me strength

So infuriating!

Oh, again with the one line throw away comment of “oh I saved her but she’s not mine anymore”…

Okay so there was a funeral, and they keep referring to Kyla-Rose in the past tense and how they couldn’t save her. Are we supposed to believe she’s dead? Cause one look at the chapter index would tell you she isn’t!

Have only read the first part of the prologue and will update as I go but had to comment now. If you’re going to end a book on a cliffhanger of someone possibly dying, don’t start the next book with a time jump and a throw away comment of “we saved her”. It’s bullshit and as a reader I feel cheated.