Amanda Stover’s Reviews > Keeping Her Close > Status Update

Prologue started you off great. Sets you up for what’s to come. Then first chapter MMC has already found her and is thinking about sex. Then next 22 chapters are then thinking about doing each other. A little bit of crazy shit thrown in but the plot is shit. Then in chapter 23 something started and TW for the next few chapters is in order. But the plot is back.