Karen’s Reviews > A Colorful Life: Drawn in Broken Crayon > Status Update
Karen
is 5% done
I don't find the mother's obsession with one book very believable. I don't find the mother's character very believable in general. Hopefully later we will be given more insight to her behavior. Also, she misses her dad. We get it.
— Sep 20, 2015 02:16PM
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Karen
is 87% done
I feel like this flashback is misplaced and is only slowing down the action right when it started speeding up
— Sep 25, 2015 08:44PM
Karen
is 85% done
I don't believe an airline official would speak this way. They would have an official speech prepared
— Sep 25, 2015 07:49PM
Karen
is 84% done
84% into the novel and suddenly we have a new POV character? Who is this guy?
— Sep 25, 2015 07:43PM
Karen
is 83% done
I'm not really sure what the plot of this book is supposed to be. It's just kind of ambling along without any real conflict, other than a couple of issues that were resolved immediately after they arose.
— Sep 25, 2015 07:33PM
Karen
is 25% done
What year is this set? I thought all the Blockbusters were closed.
— Sep 21, 2015 11:16AM
Karen
is 24% done
Possible relationship on the horizon? They haven't even been on a date.
— Sep 21, 2015 11:11AM
Karen
is 19% done
Kind of embarrassed for her for throwing herself at this guy. Girl has no chill.
— Sep 20, 2015 03:25PM
Karen
is 4% done
A lot of "telling" going on in chapter 1, plus a fairly lukewarm reaction from the MC to a fairly significant event. Perhaps this scene would have been better saved until later when we know the character better.
— Sep 20, 2015 02:12PM
