2percentright’s Reviews > Bleed > Status Update
2percentright
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Kris changes his mind more often than I change my pants. Would be nice to read about a character that sets his mind to something and actually follows through
— Jan 10, 2024 05:01PM
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2percentright
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"“I’ll come after you, and I’ll find you.”"
Now Kris wants to stop Vincent? But the last action scene he helped blow up an entire commercial district. Which is it, Kris? Make up your mind.
— Jan 11, 2024 12:54PM
Now Kris wants to stop Vincent? But the last action scene he helped blow up an entire commercial district. Which is it, Kris? Make up your mind.
2percentright
is 46% done
"Her eye twitches again and she crosses her arms."
How does she cross her arms if she's holding a rifle in a low ready position?
— Jan 07, 2024 08:26PM
How does she cross her arms if she's holding a rifle in a low ready position?
2percentright
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"“Another two attacks last night, and one of them fatal."
Is he talking about the girl and the main character? Or was there a third attack that died?
— Jan 07, 2024 02:43PM
Is he talking about the girl and the main character? Or was there a third attack that died?
