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Meredith Miller
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I’m enjoying the book/the story, but the editing is so bad that I’m really not sure what POV/who is telling the story. Sometimes the dialogue says she, then it says Laura, then it says Amy, then it says I. It gets really confusing. Is Laura telling the story? Then it would be I for the dialogue. Help me!
— Jan 09, 2024 01:10PM
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Meredith Miller
is on page 164 of 354
The plot is interesting, but the POV of the writing is very confusing. ESP dialogue ! First person? Third person?
— Jan 09, 2024 05:51PM
Meredith Miller
is on page 164 of 354
Up to this point I’ve enjoyed the idea of a remake of a horror film but the most confusing and irritating part is who is writing this story? Is it Laura then the dialogue should say I said this or that. Is a narrator? Then the dialogue should always have the person’s name. It is very confusing.I am having a hard time following the dialogues.
— Jan 09, 2024 01:18PM
