Nick Williams’s Reviews > The First to Die at the End > Status Update

ive dropped this book. i cang

again, i really like how "over the top" orion is. ofc he has valid reason to be "dramatic", his heart condition n everything,, but like the scene of him so sure death cast called him.... i just like tk think it is also due to him being a writer and always caught up in his imagination (lack of better words).

also their infatuation with each other seemed really quick... they're moving pretty fast.

i like the narrators. something about the main actors voices feels very somber, like i'm looking at a monotonous painting which feels fitting for this book...

i think a contrast between the ML and then the deathcast offical would be cool

too wordy and repetitive. too on the nose. doesn't let the reader piece it together themself. they gotta tell u exactly what their metaphor meant and how. its annoying