Jody’s Reviews > The Secret History of the Pink Carnation > Status Update

Er, doesn't the bad guy also know the identity of mom and girlfriend? Will he scruple at arresting them to get to Richard? Why don't they all run away immediately? This is dumb. The problem ending is just too happy.

I know I must suspend disbelief whilst reading fluff fiction, but there is no possible way that he would let Amy go so she could run back and collect reinforcements to rescue him. I'm sorry, but he would've kept her on hand to hold over Richard's head. That part is dumb.

I find it difficult to believe that the brilliant Amy has not even considered the possibility that her new friend is nothing more than he says he is. I suppose she is supposed to be naive and idealistic, but she is just making herself look like a dummy to me.

After two paragraphs of this book, I am hooked. Will it has such a way with prose that is just delightful. I hope I become addicted to this series.