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Just started. First impression is that the prose lingers on the tongue, but the dialogue is awkward.
— May 12, 2009 12:04PM
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colleen the convivial curmudgeon
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I'm not really sure what to make of the story. It's interesting... but also a bit slow, and the language is still awkward.
— May 17, 2009 07:49AM
