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Derek Illum
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I'm really getting confused on the feeling she feels. It's so many mixed feelings like at one point she'll think "he is annoying" and a "Idiot" but other times she'll think he's "charming and sweet" or "the hottest guy in school"(Stone 114). This really confuses me on how she thinks of him.
— Dec 14, 2023 08:10AM
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Derek Illum
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Zan is quite the character and honestly it seems a little to good to be true. But with his "charming smile" and his "sun shining cologne" I think him and her are a good match for each other (Stone 76)
— Dec 06, 2023 08:06AM
Derek Illum
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The way Stone using imagery to show the tension between the two of them is great like when their talking and she says, " Also, am I really sitting here talking to Zan Macklin like I know him, know him?" ( Stone 38). It really shows how surprised she is at how they clicked so well.
— Nov 29, 2023 08:29AM
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Their family isn't exactly the richest or have much money but they do what they can and it just kind of shows me the truth of the world to always be happy with what you have. They show this when Jax runs around screaming in joy about what little he got: "THIS IS THE BEST CHRISTMAS EVERRRRRRR! he yells right in my face with his nine year old morning breath"(Stone 15).
— Nov 15, 2023 08:17AM
