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Akane
is 35% done
Aaalright. Things are getting a bit slooow waiting for it to get better pacing. Finally, we are getting to know Aaric the third son of the King 👑 lol. And I already like him, because he knows and he wants to fight for it, go man!!💪🏻
— Dec 11, 2023 05:15PM
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Akane
is 65% done
I’m starting questioning the intelligence of the MLs because, for real, the viscount actually made a very good offer. Manpower, is a chance to grow a bigger big army against venin and wyverns. And Violet was going to refuse for what, jealousy? Wtf?😳
Because that’s what a good leader should do, the best to secure people safety and a chance to fight, right? Not saying that asshole is a nice person though…
— Dec 13, 2023 07:07PM
Because that’s what a good leader should do, the best to secure people safety and a chance to fight, right? Not saying that asshole is a nice person though…
Akane
is 21% done
It’s pretty good so far! Pensavo molto peggio. C’è un mix di ironia e drammaticità che funziona, mantiene a buon ritmo la storia. L’unica cosa che non sopporto è il stubborness dei MC, Violet cazzo non hai capito che appena impari a tenere fuori dalla tua capoccia tutti Xaden ti dice tutto?!? Cioè non capisco sta cosa non torna… ci deve essere di più sotto giusto???
— Dec 10, 2023 08:30PM
