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Holy shit! What a prologue O.O seems convenient the FBI just happened to show up when Christopher felt like he'd been there for days. I smell a set up!
— Aug 22, 2015 06:53AM
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O.O Well, the author definitely didn't breeze over the hardened criminal part. That was...violent...
— Aug 22, 2015 08:39AM
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Prison culture is so fascinating...and fucked up. If you don't go in a criminal, you definitely come out one.
— Aug 22, 2015 07:27AM
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I'm sorry, but the first sentence is starts "A slither of light..."
Um, what? It is sliver! That is basic English people! This does not bode well...
— Aug 22, 2015 02:50AM
Um, what? It is sliver! That is basic English people! This does not bode well...

