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Lisa Lucas
is on page 85 of 313
Use of the word hellhole and difficult words like turpitudinous and long character names like Dr. Velhildegildus is making me wonder if this book is really marketed as a children's book
— Jul 27, 2011 02:09PM
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Lisa Lucas
is on page 83 of 313
More awkward sentences. They are distracting me from the story. I'm finding my mind rearranging words to make sentences less awkward. Another example. "The largest room on the ground floor, wherein he now sat, was given over to his consulting salon, complete with an outrageously expensive leather couch, matching chair, and a valuable, finely crafted desk at which he wrote his patients' notes." very distracting.
— Jul 27, 2011 01:56PM
Lisa Lucas
is on page 49 of 313
A few awkward sentences. Example "...brandishing the worn board whereupon were scrawled his mendacious claims." Still an interesting plot.
— Jul 27, 2011 10:11AM
Lisa Lucas
is on page 14 of 313
Story is pretty good so far. Random things are italicized and its a little distracting.
— Jul 27, 2011 08:24AM
