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“We answered the medics’ questions; we let them do their thing.”

God were in the present now but it still feels like it's being described from the future and it sucks

“But it already pleased me to think of walking into darkness with Lockwood at my side.”

I-

“I packed my belongings into a small rucksack, strapped on my rapier and left the cottage without a backward glance. An hour later I was on the train to London”

This whole chapter lacked any and all of the emotion that the show had. I very rarely prefer a show to the source material but in this case I do

“Over the ensuing months I learned how to mix salt and magnesium in correct proportions, and how to scatter iron according to the likely power of the ghost.”

I don't like the way he tells story's. Maybe it's the POV that's throwing me off? Or maybe it's like because it's being spoken almost in past tense I think that's it. It's just so bland ...