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"Eve presented a solidly professional appearance, but deep down, he had no doubts he was a very feminine woman."
What is that supposed to mean exactly? That being a woman isn't "professional"? I found this line in particular to be extremely offensive.
— Dec 03, 2023 09:11AM
What is that supposed to mean exactly? That being a woman isn't "professional"? I found this line in particular to be extremely offensive.
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Arianna
is on page 29 of 279
The physical attractions references are getting to be extremely annoying. Is this a ghost story or a romance novel??
— Dec 03, 2023 09:01AM
Arianna
is on page 16 of 279
So far, chapters two and three could have been completely omitted from the book. The paranormal team assembling and traveling was one of the most uninteresting things I've ever read. There are also unnecessary minute descriptions of their surroundings that don't need to be included. We all know what a hotel looks like, and we don't really care what color the rooms are.
— Dec 03, 2023 08:13AM
