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3--3
Predictable, all i wanted to do was flip it forward and see the ending. It became a drag waiting for the end
— Aug 07, 2015 04:34AM
Predictable, all i wanted to do was flip it forward and see the ending. It became a drag waiting for the end
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Bronwyn Heeley
is on page 163 of 198
4 -- 2.5 maybe 3
Repetative, like REAL 'i read the same line four time in the first oage' repetative.
To me, it needed a better BETA or MS editor. It had me rushing threw it, rolling my eyes and wanting ti highlight and send back so they could fix it before submitting.
The story itslef was good, the idea solid. exacusion was like i was reading a first draft.
— Aug 07, 2015 06:19AM
Repetative, like REAL 'i read the same line four time in the first oage' repetative.
To me, it needed a better BETA or MS editor. It had me rushing threw it, rolling my eyes and wanting ti highlight and send back so they could fix it before submitting.
The story itslef was good, the idea solid. exacusion was like i was reading a first draft.
