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Not particularly well written -- too many awkwardly structured sentences bringing my attention out of the story to reread and mentally edit poorly written sentences. Also, the collar can't have a one-way catch because it has been opened after six other Weaver women have worn it. Silly discrepancies are annoying.
— Aug 01, 2015 04:48AM

