IRIFF’s Reviews > Sexy Just Walked Into Town > Status Update

The Scribe is another weird fetish story, but it was sweet and simple. Three stars

Francesca's Mother. Um. What? This was so random and disjointed, like a scene from an erratic and odd dream. Did the unnamed narrator just sniff the armpit of that random woman? I mean, really? She sniffed that stranger's hairy armpit as part of the sexual encounter. Weird. Two stars. Bordering three.

Caught Naked (?) was pretty good. I enjoyed the thrill of nearly being caught in that situation. The added adrenaline really can make the sex hotter. Three stars for that one.

The last story gets 2 stars. I'm bored and the only thing holding me to this book is that it will go toward the challenge. Are we done yet?

It's been so long, I can't remember which story this was. It was the invest one. It was okay. Just okay. Three stars.

I am finally done with with that story! It gets one star for not being able to hold my attention at all. Maybe Britlit just isn't my thing. At least not of the erotica variety.

I have determined that Brit lit isn't my thing - at least erotic Brit lit. I put this down weeks ago, it seems, and I have no impulse to pick it back up. Finally got through the ass tickling in this story and its onto another.... nope this story is still going. Sigh.

So glad to be done with this latest story, Secret Servicing. I just skimmed the last half of the story. It was a good concept, and not poorly written, but not quite executed well. I was bored. I was irritated. This gets 2 stars from me. Not my cuppa'.

Story #7, Topiary. Definitely not for me. 3 reluctant stars. I'm not into the weird shaving fetish, but that's not the only reason this one lost points. Like the first "story", this is only a scene. It completely lacks context, character development, or even sense. Yep, not into it.

Stones, story #6. 4 solid stars. Maybe 5. It's weird, unusual, creative, and pretty sexy. It would not work as a larger piece; it's just right as a short story.