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The beginning was weak because it's unrealistic for a seven year old girl to talk and act like what should be a 12 year old. The 4th chapter of the first post read the strongest so far. On to Part 2 to catch up with Lila Bard!

Unrealistic for Kosika to be a seven year old She speaks and acts like maybe a 12 years old which makes the opening weak. Chapter 4 is the strongest so far. On to Part 2 to catch up with Lila Bard!