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How many women have been raped but are unable to acknowledge it? And worse, live with their rapists and have children with them?
Oct 17, 2023 12:34AM
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How ugly are we as writers that we are drawn to the most morbid aspects of the living to feast on it to great acclaim? I am really disliking the characters of this story but it all rings so true, I can’t look away.
Oct 17, 2023 12:38AM
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“Athena’s original text is almost embarrassingly biased.”

“We switch one of the white bullies to a Chinese character and one of the more vocal Chinese labourers to a sympathetic white farmer.”

Chapter 1 made me want to spit on the protagonist for her disgusting jealousy. This one just wants to make me scream at the causalness with which white people shrug off discomfort after centuries of oppression of others.
Oct 14, 2023 11:26AM
Yellowface


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Jealous people punish others for the universe’s indifference to them. Everybody deserves good things but nobody is owed good things. Jealousy is such an ugly, murderous thing to nurture.
Oct 14, 2023 10:43AM
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