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My number 1 issue with the book is the writing. It gets really annoying when every 2nd to 3rd sentence starts with a character's name followed by a verb. This is especially annoying when it is the SAME character who is being referenced to. Especially when it is, say, a sexual encounter between two people. Using "he" or preferably a more complex sentence structure would go a long way towards saving my sanity
Jul 14, 2015 01:39PM
Irresistible (Irresistible, #1)

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