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Erik
Erik is 43% done
Cute story, most characters are compelling (though Mika, despite being our POV character and the one whose backstory has been the most expanded on, feels one dimensional to me. Her personality just seems to be "whatever is best for the situation at hand"). The dialogue has some issues with Therapy Speak, where often I doubt whether people would actually communicate like that. However, I am having fun so far!
Sep 06, 2023 02:35AM
The Very Secret Society of Irregular Witches

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Erik
Erik is 55% done
"Highly masculine epic fantasies" is a weird phrase to say. This is teaching me I dislike Cozy fantasy and the romance genre, but still ok so far!
Sep 07, 2023 03:06PM
The Very Secret Society of Irregular Witches


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