Lime’s Reviews > The Volume of the Heart: The hearts flame series > Status Update

The errors continues. The quick chapters continue. The time frame is confusing as the author keep jumping ahead without making sure we can follow. The children seem far too mature for their age, knowing certain concepts and speaking harder words.

Still not sure about this book. Too many chapters and lot of grammar errors as well as misspelling. Hard for me to keep motivated to read a book that sorely needed a proof reading.