Laurel (Yeetarandomwriter) Burgess’s Reviews > The Shadow Queen > Status Update

K I'm enjoying this more.
Friends of king: well he can't die!!
Friend of to be queen: well she can't die!!
The King and to be Queen: I just want to do the right thing, if I die I die y'know. Stop fighting.

(Sorry all, I'm grumpy for non book reasons and apparently taking it out on this :'( )

BUT WHY WOULD YOU HUNT THE LOST PRINCESS, SIR
sure it is for your kingdom but have you no shame or brain? Obviously the queen is a horrible witch woman! I need some hesitation earlier and guilt? That maybe it isn't a good or noble idea to hunt someone? Some confusion about WHY the queen wants the princess's heart?
I wish he went to the queen and was cursed/forced into doing this.

ERR

oh will this be awkward

ok but the bird character is hilarious
so brutal, calm down girl

Ah to be the friend/family member of the protagonist and have a five percent chance of survival

"Bring me the princess's heart"
well just wait until about half the book and behold you are talking to him right now

ok but the fact that ya'll have to strip to dragon shift makes me wonder why ya'll didn't find a magical way to wear clothes after since this world does have magic and you come from a kingdom of dragon shifters so this isn't a new problem
also why wear under things when you shift if they are just going to rip off (I assume - unless for some reason THOSE don't)
like how awkward
XD
I would just refuse

See when they say something like "blood oaths" it isn't a good idea even to save your kingdom
idk
just saying

Bruh just tell the king not to go. He obviously doesn't know she's evil yet. I mean that won't stop him but still.