Irushi’s Reviews > An Ember in the Ashes > Status Update

It was going great... until it t The multiple love interests didn't add to the plot of the story, it distracted. The story was going well, however the ending needed depth (quite frankly the whole story needed depth) and possibly more explanations. The foreshadowing was ridiculously obvious-the characters just choose to ignore anyone telling them they were wrong. The characters were insipid frequently.