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P. Kirby
is 20% done
Stilted dialogue. Painfully contrived. Excessive angst. Why am I reading? Because the alternative--cutting metal with a plasma torch in 90-degree weather--is possibly worse. Possibly.
— Jun 12, 2015 12:10PM
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P. Kirby
is 52% done
And now Victoria, the fiancee, is added to the "evil females who hate Jessica" cast list. So lame. Only ready because curious about the twist at the 80% mark. May not make it though. The drama in this is strident.
— Jun 15, 2015 12:06PM
P. Kirby
is 12% done
Stilted dialogue, especially from Jace, the hero. Sounds nothing like a teenage boy. Meh.
— Jun 08, 2015 11:52AM
P. Kirby
is 7% done
Started this, found it okay, but maybe "trying to hard." Protagonist's pain is understandable, but...then I started reading The Drowned Cities, and this didn't seem that compelling anymore. I'll get back to it...eventually.
— May 31, 2015 12:43PM
P. Kirby
is starting
Tackling some of the older backlog on my Kindle. Had a good run with YA lately, but...contemporaries are always iffy.
— May 27, 2015 03:56PM
