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Ellie
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Good writing, but SO SLOW! No plot- at least that I can see. The setting is dull and uninteresting. The characters are flat and unlikable. The author has done nothing to pull the reader in.
Jun 01, 2015 01:50PM
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Ellie
Ellie is on page 130 of 240
Jun 09, 2015 06:12AM
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Ellie
Ellie is on page 116 of 240
My current thoughts on the characters Cyan- cold Cyan's Mother- mean Kammi- sweet but immature Mayur- creepy
Jun 09, 2015 05:45AM
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Ellie
Ellie is on page 116 of 240
Jun 09, 2015 05:44AM
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Ellie
Ellie is on page 100 of 240
I'm finding the writing quite soothing now. It has picked up the pace a bit.
Jun 08, 2015 07:54PM
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Ellie
Ellie is on page 78 of 240
The highlight of the last chapter I read? Cyan sells sea glass to a tourist shop. Ugh. This is so boring.
Jun 08, 2015 01:45PM
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Ellie
Ellie is on page 51 of 240
Jun 01, 2015 01:48PM
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