Marco Sanchez (Dragondarkness30)’s Reviews > I am Morgan le Fay: A Tale from Camelot > Status Update

That was the slowest ending now Igraine recognizes who Morgan was and that there was always something different in her since she was a baby and now she is seeing something in her. I didn't like this ending it needed to be fleshed out more at least a few more chapters I don't agree with the rating of this book. After Morgan sees Thomas again it all went downhill from there...

Morgan seems to be giving up her ego and power here yes she was not fond of Arthur but now she and her mother meet with Merlin it was time for Arthur's coronation and she was thinking why she was never treated the way her half brother was being treated she knew more than him why had she not been a queen yet. But a coronation was being held to make her half brother a king her sister would also join them.

The intruder that came after this would be the death of Thomas as Morgan had envisioned first the intruder cut off Thomas' hand then it was the end of him after that long scene of her not wanting to let him go. That it wasn't in her power to let him leave because she knew he would die, well he's finally gone...I didn't think I could take anymore of the back and forth arguing of her not letting him leave...

Ok, now we are getting somewhere. I would have done something different if I was Thomas in this scene. He finally found what had been giving Morgan the power to do the things she had been doing with so much power in the milpreve. It got rid of a lot of magical things that were happening, and the invisible walls around Caer Morgana came down...

This has to be the corniest chapter in the book ever since Thomas has returned all she wants him to do is rest and bring her flowers that's all she is talking about in this chapter it does nothing for the story. He is treating her like a queen. I don't know what the author was thinking with this chapter. Honestly, it could have been left out of the story.

Now was the time she was summoning Thomas to herself. The vision she was seeing was something different she had never seen she was wondering what was going on with him. He looked different. This vision she was seeing was a knight coming towards her it wasn't until he got closer that she recognized this knight in a sling with blue eyes....Thomas was coming...

With Morgause now gone, Ongwynn now passed on. Morgan was on her own Morgause had wanted to live her own life and finally find someone to marry. She had Ongwynn's home fixed up to her taste, and she was able to make it a home for herself. Now was the time she would finally meet the piskies. She would make them her little helpers nor her slaves she said. They only stood so tall as they were invisible at first...

Finally, Morgan comes back to Caer Ongwynn from Avalon and is happy to see both Ongwynn and her sister, but her sister tells her what took her so long. The vision she had of Ongwynn comes to pass before this Morgan tries to heal her but it's her time. Once a certain kind of flower blooms and comes to her by Morgause bringing it to her to see and smell. This is when Cernunnos comes for Ongwynn, a very special moment..

It seems this chapter she was forces to learn a lot about herself in Avalon she was getting pretty tired of her mother always longing for Arthur her mother wasn't herself anymore. There was no sense in staying. She knew there was nothing left to do now but return to Caer Ongwynn. It was like Ongwynn was her mother now, and she had just seen a vision of her not only getting old but passing away she had to get to her..

This chapter was very slow. It seems like Morgan was getting to know Cernunnos and
him recognizing she was looking more like the fae there in Avalon than ever. Now Thomas was recognizing her as a queen, almost royalty, as he bowed to do whatever she wanted. It was time he be knighted as a knight of Avalon now she was to send him on a journey to look for her half brother Arthur.