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Michele Cacano
Michele Cacano is 7% done
Not sure I can wade through this. Sorely in need of an editor!
May 04, 2015 01:47AM
Breach (Blood Bargain)

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Michele Cacano
Michele Cacano is 22% done
So many grammatical errors... Principals instead of principles, cubicals instead of cubicles, wrapping instead of rapping... Also, a lot of mixed sentence structures and lack of punctuation make for a laborious read. But, there is an interesting seed of storytelling here. Gonna see where she takes it.
May 28, 2015 04:20AM
Breach (Blood Bargain)


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