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Lindsey
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I love the idea of the story. We love to see a character succeed, but we also love to see them struggle. I feel that Phaet almost was too advanced for Militia, Bao could've done more for us to see that Phaet was fighting to survive. This book needs more character development also, to truly know the characters.
— May 03, 2015 02:47PM
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Lindsey
is on page 213 of 336
I love the idea of the story. We love to see a character succeed, but we also love to see them struggle. I feel that Phaet almost was too advanced for Militia, Bao could've done more for us to see that Phaet was fighting to survive. This book needs more character development also, to truly know the characters.
— May 03, 2015 02:47PM