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Naomi
is 28% done
Things are happening, which is good, but the love interest is a sort of demigod with "cerulean eyes" and "chiselled cheekbones." A bit bored with underwear-model types...
— May 02, 2015 05:54AM
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Naomi
is 60% done
Not bad by any stretch, but there's no real conflict driving the plot forward.
— May 02, 2015 06:32AM
Naomi
is 15% done
The writing is sturdy but nothing's happened yet. A lot of purposeless minutiae - does the protagonist's dog relieving itself on the lawn service the plot somehow?
— May 02, 2015 05:22AM
