Sophia Garcia’s Reviews > Patina > Status Update

inciting incident 5/1 : the inciting incident in my book patina is when her mom gets hit by a car she tried to get it off her mind but can never get that off he mind.

Point of View 4/24: the point of view in my book is first person. i know this because she is talking like she says it. when she says something about someone she will say, "they are really good, but I know if I try I can beat them." which is her talking which mean this book is in first person point of view.

AUDIENCE AND PURPOSE:this book is mostly about track, because they mostly talk about running track and getting nice track shoes etc. The purpose of this book is to show that once there something that you really like doing your gonna want to do good in all of the other stuff you do, like school, because if you do bad in school then you wont be able to do the thing you love doing. because you did bad in school.