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Fuecoco
is 10% done
Enjoying the pacing and momentum of the narrative. The stakes are established early on. Worldbuilding is well-integrated so as not to make the pacing stumble.
My singular complaint is regarding use of f*ck and derivatives.This serves to jarringly derail immersion. I’m not a prude, but just because a word CAN be a noun, verb, adverb and adjective doesn’t mean it SHOULD. By Ch5, immersion is f*ck*d 16 times.
— May 30, 2023 09:51AM
My singular complaint is regarding use of f*ck and derivatives.This serves to jarringly derail immersion. I’m not a prude, but just because a word CAN be a noun, verb, adverb and adjective doesn’t mean it SHOULD. By Ch5, immersion is f*ck*d 16 times.
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Fuecoco
is 10% done
I’ve finished my sample and now I’m waiting for the copy from the library
— Jun 11, 2023 02:21PM

