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In the beginning it's Latavia Wakefield. Now it's Watkins!
Apr 23, 2015 04:12AM
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That moment when you have nothing nice to say.
Apr 26, 2015 04:08AM
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Apr 24, 2015 04:55AM
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The errors are irritating. The author can't keep up with the characters correct first/last names, ages or timeline. The storyline is decent but it's hard to enjoy when something is said to have happened to a character while they were in their mid teens, that character is now 29yo but knew someone 23 yrs ago...while they both were in their mid teens! WTF! Super irritated.
Apr 23, 2015 08:00PM
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Kellee
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Super irritated. The author doesn't remember the main character's correct name
Apr 23, 2015 04:11AM
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Corny jokes and a lot of errors. I've already skipped pages due to characters repeating what another character has already described in detail.
Apr 22, 2015 07:24PM
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Apr 22, 2015 10:00AM
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