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Alli
is 71% done
Why didn’t they stay in the office? Someone came home and they immediately were like “let’s go where the people are”
Was there not a window in there? Lock the office door, ransack and bail out the window if whoever it is doesn’t leave quick. Chances are Kyle would’ve left.
And both TV versions of Kyle were on the football team
— May 22, 2023 08:12PM
Was there not a window in there? Lock the office door, ransack and bail out the window if whoever it is doesn’t leave quick. Chances are Kyle would’ve left.
And both TV versions of Kyle were on the football team
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Alli
is 97% done
Oh look. It’s the return of “Mafia”.
I hate whoever did the “editing” on this
— May 25, 2023 10:59AM
I hate whoever did the “editing” on this
Alli
is 95% done
I assumed that Adam would "take care of" Valenti for them. But he's turned into a little psychopath all of a sudden.
You know, Max has that whole connection thing to literally everyone that has ever lived in his species, he could just go in there an be like "I'm looking for Adams parents" and figure him out
And if they need to get rid of psycho alien boy, it's not long until his akino & they can just be like "nope"
— May 25, 2023 10:54AM
You know, Max has that whole connection thing to literally everyone that has ever lived in his species, he could just go in there an be like "I'm looking for Adams parents" and figure him out
And if they need to get rid of psycho alien boy, it's not long until his akino & they can just be like "nope"
Alli
is 88% done
This rescue attempt sounds like a disaster and it’s literally just started.
— May 23, 2023 11:48PM
Alli
is 85% done
Cameron is a dick. Selling out two kids, destroying their lives, for $2500? Even the $5k she originally wanted wasn’t that much.
And now they HAVE to kill Valenti, right? He knows who they all are now.
Show Michael (either one) would NEVER have said their names.
— May 22, 2023 09:31PM
And now they HAVE to kill Valenti, right? He knows who they all are now.
Show Michael (either one) would NEVER have said their names.
Alli
is 82% done
Also, why didn’t anyone dreamwalk into Valentis dream and plant subliminal thoughts? Michael’s and let him in on the plan? The guards that Isabel saw and plant Trojan horse thoughts? Why didn’t Michael spend some of that downtime not sleeping and dream walking instead? Right into his friends’ dreams and was like “here’s what’s up inside this bunker”? So many options that went unused
— May 22, 2023 09:16PM
Alli
is 80% done
Adam is creepy.
And definitely up to shady shit. Was he sneaking off to see Valenti? Was he spying on other girls? Killing small animals?
He went to the mini mart for butter? Where’d he get the money? No concern about being caught by “daddy” or any of the other guards from the compound that live local?
So sketch
— May 22, 2023 09:11PM
And definitely up to shady shit. Was he sneaking off to see Valenti? Was he spying on other girls? Killing small animals?
He went to the mini mart for butter? Where’d he get the money? No concern about being caught by “daddy” or any of the other guards from the compound that live local?
So sketch
Alli
is 80% done
Why doesn’t anyone in the compound seem concerned that Adam is out and loose in the world? Shouldn’t that be more of a concern for a covert quasi government facility trying to capture and destroy aliens?When your pet alien gets loose you go get it.Or at least look?
Also, what would have happened to Adam when his alien puberty came & no one told him about the crystals? Valenti would assume that’s their lifespan
— May 22, 2023 09:05PM
Also, what would have happened to Adam when his alien puberty came & no one told him about the crystals? Valenti would assume that’s their lifespan
Alli
is 78% done
No matter what, taking a traumatized boy back into the military compound he was held captive in seems like a ridiculously stupid plan.
How have these kids stayed hidden for so long? OG show kids we’re SOOO much better had the subterfuge & covert ops.
Reboot show, they were all adults so it doesn’t totally count.
— May 22, 2023 08:56PM
How have these kids stayed hidden for so long? OG show kids we’re SOOO much better had the subterfuge & covert ops.
Reboot show, they were all adults so it doesn’t totally count.
Alli
is 75% done
Is Adam going to end up being a psycho?
Also, I’m noticing that a lot of the book characters that were in the OG series were in the reboot. Like Cameron being there, Maxs bed buddy instead Valenti’s spy.
Was there an Adam in either show? The fourth alien in the OG was Tess and reboot was Dallas so… no?
— May 22, 2023 08:49PM
Also, I’m noticing that a lot of the book characters that were in the OG series were in the reboot. Like Cameron being there, Maxs bed buddy instead Valenti’s spy.
Was there an Adam in either show? The fourth alien in the OG was Tess and reboot was Dallas so… no?
Alli
is 72% done
Max acts like his girlfriend thinking someone is cute will instantly be a break up. That if she finds someone attractive she’ll be unable to help herself and will instant fall for him
— May 22, 2023 08:18PM

