Elithanathile’s Reviews > Savior > Status Update
Elithanathile
is 38% done
// The author of obnoxiously ignores - just for the sake of angst and plot - the fact that Mason’s father just got out of jail … so you’d think he would be prohibited from contacting Mason, as one of the conditions of his probation, and the other being after what just happened, Mason should be calling the police, which would send the father right back straight to fucking prison!! So what the fuck, author!!
— May 08, 2023 10:14PM
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Elithanathile
is 57% done
// Also, if he killed the dad, it would be justifiable homicide/self-defense!!
— May 08, 2023 11:15PM
Elithanathile
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// Is this author a fucking idiot?! Why would he say get out of here when he could’ve simply held him there at gunpoint till the cops showed up and they could’ve all told the cops exactly what happened and his father would’ve been arrested and shipped right off back to prison, this time for attempted fucking murder!! This author is a fucking idiot!!
— May 08, 2023 11:14PM
Elithanathile
is 57% done
// That doesn’t even make any sense, because those two should be right on their fucking way right back into prison!! So the fact that this author ignores simple judicial logic is absolutely fucking obnoxious + absurd! Either she’s insulting the intelligence of every fucking person she can, or she’s a fucking ignorant idiot! Spoiler alert: it’s the latter mixed with a sad + unsuccessful attempt at the former!!
— May 08, 2023 11:10PM
Elithanathile
is 40% done
// I really want authors to keep their own mannerisms and quirks out of their fucking books BC it’s really fucking obnoxious!! The author has it so that every fucking person says “dude” and not everybody says that IRL, hardly anybody at all, and the fact that I know this author does makes it even more fucking obnoxious!! The author really needs to keep her quirks to herself because it’s fucking obnoxious!!
— May 08, 2023 11:07PM
Elithanathile
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// Excellent book in terms of plot and story though :-D!! Really enjoying it so far!!
— May 08, 2023 07:02PM
Elithanathile
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// I absolutely despise it when an author doesn’t understand her own continuity!! In the first book, flushing the toilet while someone showered made the water boiling hot, but now she is saying that it makes the water ice cold!! Author, you’re selling a book, do the fucking work, and make sure that it is exemplary and perfect for consumer consumption!! No fucking excuses!! For fucks sake!! So fucking obnoxious!!
— May 08, 2023 06:44PM
Elithanathile
is 21% done
// This author is fucking pissing me off!! I absolutely cannot stand it when an author expects payment for something, but then delivers a substandard end result, in terms of typos and the absolute lack of continuity!!
— May 08, 2023 06:41PM
Elithanathile
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// Yup, that's the bullshit, corruption, and fuckery of the judicial system >:-o!!!!!!!!
— May 08, 2023 06:18PM
Elithanathile
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// Just as a sidenote, if this author makes it so that the MC completely forgives garbage, vile, repulsive, disgusting family members who really need to be evaporated, eliminated, and decimated from his life, I’m going to be really fucking pissed and aggravated!! It’s the most fucking obnoxious, absurd, ignorant, ludicrous thing on earth when authors do really fucking delusional and obnoxious stuff like that!!!!!
— May 08, 2023 05:57PM

